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already broken.

because i'm already broken.
but you did this to me,
cut me open to watch me bleed.
as i pour forth love from my veins,
you turn your head and look away.
i'm not good enough anyway.
i'll die tonight
cold and alone,
no love in your voice
as you sing our song,
just lay me down and walk away,
my soul is already too late to save,
but i'm not good enough anyway.
i was already broken,
falling away.

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just let me go, you don't want me, never did, it's such a shame it has to end like this, let the romance bleed away, i'm not good enough anyway.

the truth hurts, so break my heart.

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  • dustookie2
    November 27, 2008

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    There is much pain within these lines and I guess so many of us have felt like this many times over during our life or will before it's done. But beneath it all there is strength of being who you are and damned if anyone is going to tell me I am not good enough for them....You capture the emotion of a breaking heart