Old Mother Hubbard went to the cupboard
and what she saw there broke her heart,
her husband and maid weren’t playing charades
she quickly would fire that young tart!
and tear all those cupboards apart!
Author notes
nope
lol
A contest entry
- Old Mother Hubbard by PinkPony.
650 points, ended November 27, 2008, 19 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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LOL This was a delightful take on the old nursery rhyme. I love the twists to it. Congrats on the HM.
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Thank you so much 'daviscth' - glad you enjoyed my 'twisted' fairy tale...lol
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Wonderful
Very creative and so well done. Congratulations on the honorable mention.
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Thank you so much 'Penman' - glad you enjoyed this.
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Cute write here
Yihaw that there hussie is lucky to still be alive
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lol - thank you 'stories' - glad you enjoyed this.
Yihaw, you are sure right about that!....lololol
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VERY WELL DONE ABOOMER! Congratulations on the honorable winner!!
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Thank you 'Pat...' - glad you enjoyed (you did enjoy, didn't you?.....lol.....well, at least maybe the picture warmed the blood a little....
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Mother Hubbard's lifestyle has really changed since the olden days. I always just assumed she was a widow with just the dog for company.
Yeah, tear down the cupboard so it can't happen again -- at least not there!
Congrats on your HM
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lol - thank you 'judyjudyjudy' - I guess I was thinking that the fairy tales we used to hear left out a lot of details!...lol
maybe it was just a cheating boyfriend??...
glad you enjoyed.
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Congratulations
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Thanks
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Congrats on the HM!
I hope the cupboards weren't the only thing she tore apart! 
Very amusing piece hun, congrats on the HM 
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lol - thank you Lady D - glad you enjoyed.
Well, she fired that 'tart' - methinks she might have been better off to have boarded Mr. Hubbard up in the cupboard....lololol
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LOL!! brilliant and good pic.
congrats on H.M:
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Thank you so much 'carl dunford' for reading and your lovely comment. I'm glad you enjoyed this.
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oh my goodness this was hilarious!! what a fun write, i love what you did with the prompt... it rhymes and everything so fun!
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Thank you so much 'dustytiger' - glad you enjoyed this and it brought a smile to your face.
best wishes
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YES! And bop that husband and kick the tart!
Made me smile and think you are a smarty pants poet to have written such a clever poem. YES! Fun to read and even MORE!
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lol - thank you 'PinkPony' - glad you enjoyed and got a laugh out of this.
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aww I see that there was foul play going on.. hmmm maybe she should visit the cupboard more often.. lol
I'm so sorry I really am.. damn... Excellent poem that you got here
good luck
kat
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Thanks kat - glad you enjoyed....lol
she tore those cupboards OUT - no more space for 'hanky panky'....lolol
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ya the young tart needs to wear more clothing and get dirty lol...very cute piece, thanks for sharing and giving us a laugh.. good luck
Linda
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thank you Linda - glad you enjoyed this and got a laugh out of it....lol
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Tee-Hee...Go Mother Hubbard!!!
This
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Thanks Az - glad you enjoyed - and sided with poor Mrs. Hubbard...LOLOL
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Booo Mother hubbard, how could you fire a maid that looks that hot ?? seriously
great write hun, good luck in your contest
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Thanks Rob - glad you enjoyed.
why am I not surprised you'd side with the husband???....LOLOLOL
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YaY mother Hubbard fire her lol I like this left me with a smile good luck to you in the contest best wishes always be well.
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Thanks Starz - glad you enjoyed
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