The c in this road wind at amazing s p e e d s.
u
r
v
e
s
Laid out on this table is all your .d.e.s.i.r.e.d. needs.
y
a
w
r
i
a
t
Clear the holy s that leads to the pearly gates.
Or take the elevator d/o/w/n/s/t/a/i/r/s from the sea;
No after[death] rebates
((Mistakes .A.R.E. mistakes)).
Tumbling from the -b a r r e n- sky,
I see clouds above my
feet.
Birds and planes all resting their w\i\n/g/s,
not minding my heart[beat].
The flavor of a -m o o n l e s s- night rests on my [s][t][u][d][d][e][r][i][n][g] lips.
No .e.x.c.e.p.t.i.o.n.s. or e
x
c
u
s
e
s.
And my heart does nervous f i s.
l p
|T|i|l|e|d| and p : a : t : t : e : r : n : e : d a c r o s s the floor,
Is my .p.a.s.s.e.d.g i f tFUTURE story;
u/n/r/e/a/d/a/b/l/e, u n t r a c a b l e-
My eyes are much too b u r .
l r y
The f\l\a\t\t\e\r\e\d weather is a s young man.
o
r
r
y
And .y.e.t. hErE hE iS;
to come -c a l m- me a
g
a
i
n.
~R~i~b~b~o~n~s~ XcurseX is t/i/e/d to this chair,
But I'll sit there y.
a
w
y
n
a
My eyes are c i p e
r p l d,
My [heart] is -b r u i s e d- ;
I can only w\o\r\r\y for .t.o.d.a.y.
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A contest entry
- Have you ? by aurora13.
520 points, ended November 30, 2008, 17 entries
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Comments
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I totally looooved it! "and yet here he is to calm me agian"! brilliant!


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Loved it!!! I love the way you made the words out, it really deepens the poem.

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Interesting piece here
Very unique this is and what a style

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Very interesting form ... can see the passion you've put into writing this ..
Thanks for sharing .. Good Luck..





