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Plundering





You my sweet shrinking  violet
bless my heart with a pretty gaze
from your doe eyes winking.

Let me be the gentle pirate
who will plunder your body

Enslave you with an embrace
of firmness and warmth.

As I taste the wine
upon your neck
and erect your nipples
of sweet strawberry.

My sword will penetrate deep into you
and bring out pleading sighs
of More!
all night long.

You will walk my plank,
but never leave my ship.







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  • My Souls Reflection gold member
    December 9, 2008

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    This is one hot pirate...no girl would want to leave this ship!
    I like the way you stimulate my imagination with this piece...'plundering' brings about many erotic thoughts, all very heated indeed.

    Thank you for your entry!

    Annie


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    November 28, 2008

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    well pirate do in fact quest for booty, i like this poem, heated as always, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest