"Old Mother Hubbard went to her cupboard..."
Only to find a visitor was sitting there
Small gray, without a slightest care
Jump to the counter…then to the floor
Away he went towards the door….
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Write a poem that starts with the words, "Old Mother Hubbard went to her cupboard..."
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- Old Mother Hubbard by PinkPony.
650 points, ended November 27, 2008, 19 entries
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Nice. I really like this one. It sounds like a limerick. I love limericks. Very cleaver and fun.
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Very good.
I loved this it was very funny.
I liked how it flowed.
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LOL this is cute I loved it!!!!
Good luck
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Darling!!! Oh so CUTE!
You have described an enchanted folk being, maybe a leprechaun wearing gray because it's not St. Pat's Day yet.
I smiled like this >>> 
lol
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wow...its perfect i love it!!
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