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Concupiscene

 

 

 

 

 

I want to spread across you like a warm rain
let you quiver as rivulets stream across your skin
in the form of tiny kisses that taste you deeply.

Feel your arms wrap around my body
as your breath blows into my mouth
and I lose myself in your beating heart.

You are caramel candy
made for satiation
and I taste your desire
deeper than my tongue can go.

Riding each undulation of your body
as it convulses with each flicker
inside those warm depths of your body.
To that point where return
is pleasantly impossible.

 

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  • LittleMoon silver member
    December 2, 2008

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    Oh lovely, if only someone had written something like this for me when I was young. It is so sensual and sets my memory recalling the times.......... Well done


  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    November 30, 2008

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    Wow! this is one very hot, erotic poem.. seems that the temp in this room has gone way up.. the imagery is this poem is vivid and very very steamy.. nice images running through my mind right about now..

    Excellent take on the prompt

    good luck
    kat


    • Swan song gold member
      December 4, 2008
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      Sorry for the late thank you on the gold I just got in What an honor and you made my week but I must say your prompt did a lot


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    November 28, 2008
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    words that just knock you down as you read them, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest