I am angry so I laugh
And sad so I fake a smile
I'm on an emotional rampage..But I
Must not show my feelings
For feeling is weakness
And weak I am not...immediatly
My body may be strong but my soul is weak
Insecure thoughts surround me
Her words were...
Unexpected and yet now
They seem so true
I sit alone in this
Abysmal exsuse for a cafeteria
Wishing I would slip away into
Nonreality
For she has somehow found another
Way to make me
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A contest entry
- Emotional Wreck by ToxicSuicide.
750 points, ended January 11, 34 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Thank you! Ohmygoshohmygosh! This has so many emotions.. I just love it. Thanks for entering my contest and best of luck!
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This is brutal. And by that I mean extremely painful. You literally described a tiny memory in my life, 5/6 years ago.. Loved the last three lines. Simple, yet wrenches the heart out and douses it in cyanide.
I'm sorry you feel this way. I know how much it sucks. Keep writing, miss E. You have a talent on you. 
~S.
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DEEP!I JUST LUV LUV LUV deep poetry writers!This was right up my alley!
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Wow. This is intense! Your feelings are portrayed in such a real way, and though you talk of pain and sadness, it's beautiful in how you do it. Seriously, just by reading this poem, I can tell you have immense talent. It's lovely. I need to read more of your work.
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Thank you so much for letting me know im doing okay, well appreciated.
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