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The end

You are my heaven on earth,
You show me love and all I do is hurt.
The words you choose to say,
explains everything in just a day.
I do not deserve such amazing creation,
I cannot win in this little love competition,
You deserve much better,
and i know you think so too.
But why does my heart wanna spend its life with u?
This is love in every possible way,
I cannot control it so I have a price to pay,
You can stop loving me,
Yet i would never stop loving you unconditionally,
You are the only person my heart belongs to in this world,
but don't worry!
I will just be the broken heart girl,
I can see the halo above your head
You have already made your decision,
so all has been said.
Au Revoir! M'adore!
My only lover,
i will love you now and forever!

RIP Devina+Shaq's love

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  • SlowlyxFadingxAway
    November 27, 2008
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    thanks a lot!


  • Ti Amo Te Quiero
    November 27, 2008

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    I like the flow and rhyme...thought might be a little bumpy at parts. But it was quite nicely written Good job Keep writing ya!! Cheers!

  • Klc3666
    November 27, 2008
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    I reallie like this poem you did an excellent job on it...Keep on writing :