I put up a strong front,
whenever loneliness confronts.
I don't blink tears,
even when in despair.
I know i always have a pair of invisible wings,
to me, happiness it brings.
Its like a guardian angel nurse,
that will help me fly over this feeling of hopelessness.
Im not going to think,
what wonderful happiness they sink in.
I know i always have a pair of invisible wings,
to me, a song of hope it sings.
These wings have made me last longer in time,
the ladder of hope i've been taught to climb.
Author notes
Inspired by a song 
Option II. I want you to write what helps you get over a loss. I know that it is a hard thing to do, (I've had to do it...over...and over...and-)Tell me what helped you through it, but in a poetic way.
"I may not know who I am, but I know who I loved, and now he's gone, taking a part of me with him."
Yeaa, hope is there. Thinking of these wings, it gives me hope. If i could, i would give you a pair of these invisible wings as well. If you have anything feel free to leave me a message, im always there if you need someone to talk to. Take care sis!! 
A contest entry
- Ages 14 and under: YOUR FAVORITE PREWRITE by Sky Prince Ireland.
800 points, ended December 15, 2008, 23 entries
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• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Prewrites From Only Children At Allpoetry by Violinstrings.
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Another brilliant poem. Hope is all we have in this life.
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this is beautiful
you write well with your phrases and keeping a flow of ideas and rhyming
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This is a very beautiful write. It is poetic, and hope inspiring. I thank you for this write. I really do. Best of luck in the contest.
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Wow. Incredible. I love the emotion in this. I wish I had me a pair of those.
Beautiful flow.
Write on.
~*~SP~*~
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wow
love the wings-image
if you ever market them definitely want them
to soar off far away and .look at people living somewhere/anywhere
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good job
Wow this is nice. In spite of some of the sadness in it, I find this soaring. Seeing how you talk about wings in it, that's why I find it soaring. Anyway thanks for sharing and entering my contest. Good luck. Brian
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Simple and touching
Inspiration is the 1st word to describe this write when I read this piece
Your words give me a sense of hope and never give up feeling...The title Invisible Wings ..gives me a sense of being to know not to give up and give in...
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Absolutely lovely!It's truthful,strong,and leaves quite an impression!I love how you rhyme and your open honesty in your poem makes this a favorite!I love that you bare your soul and write as though you're giving yourself motivation to persevere as well as being so honest about who you are and the way you are.Poems and people are very easy to connect with when they're out in the open and not hiding anything.You show fearlessness and a willingness to confront the truth though it may be contrary to what you or others believe at times.Brilliantly done!
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It's very nice, a very light and breezy sort of poem, an uplifting one.
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"I know i always have a pair of invisible wings,
to me, a song of hope it sings"
WOW i love these lines. and your last stanza too, it was definitely brilliant. i really enjoyed this poem, its really beautiful, and i love how you connected hope to invisible wings that you have. wonderful! keep penning i really enjoyed this write
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Nice !
Nice poem of hope and i enjoyed reading it...
oh how beautiful was this
"I know i always have a pair of invisible wings,
to me, happiness it brings.
Its like a guardian angel nurse,
that will help me fly over this feeling of hopelessness."
loved it !
oh i'm the first one to comment... i'm sure othere will like this too...
Shuberth
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