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(Why) Care [still needs work, but it's a song in progress]

We gave up on trying
We're comfortably dying
Tell me why should I care anymore?

Tell me why
                  oh
                      why
  Why should I care anymore?

There's something we're missing
But no one will listen
The answer is there
                                    Just out of reach

There's something we're needing
Eternally bleeding
Solution is there

But no one will see

Tell me why
                  oh
                      why
  Why should I care anymore?

Tell me why
                  oh
                      why
  Why should I care anymore?

We gave up on trying
We gave up on fighting
We're so apathetic
And just fine with dying

We gave up on fighting
For what we believe
We're smiling and lying
Pretending to breathe

Tell me why
                  oh
                      why
  Why should I care anymore?
Tell me why
                  oh
                      why
  Why should I care anymore?

I'm just a man
Stuck in a land
That couldn't give
A good god damn

And I
        No I
I just don't care anymore

Please tell me what you think

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  • iamlost gold member
    January 15

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    Hoodwink!

    "We gave up on trying
    We gave up on fighting
    We're so apathetic
    And just fine with dying"

    I love this! Again, I would love to hear it set to music, this makes me want to write songs again (I stopped and slipped almost completely into straight poetry). I really love the tone in this one as well, I'm sick of the apathetic shit all over the country but when if feels you can't do anything, you kind of slip into the same mood, even if you hate it. This is a great piece!

    ~lost