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All I Am

All I have in this world
Is all I really need
What I have inside

All I truly have
Is all I truly am
I won't sell my pride

All I really want
Is to be free to live my life

I will never risk my honor
Never run and hide
I will call no one master
For this I will fight

Integrity
Is out of fashion
But I wear mine with pride

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  • Fabio Sardi silver member
    May 19, 2009

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    Very well written. I usually like and write free verses, but I liked this poem very much even if it is in rhymes.

    I like the whole poem, but I think the second part is better, gave me stronger feelings.


  • Lady Altheia
    January 2, 2009

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    Everyone shouldstrive to be the best person they can be. Pride in moderation is fine. Best of luck to you in your future writes.


  • Mr.
    November 27, 2008
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    I liked it.