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The Gratitude of a Broken Flower



Do you see how I still smile for you?
a blossom in bloom with only one petal.

The beauty of this is that you pick me
and fold me into the pages of a diary.

Just me, a flower besieged by the wind
and heavy rains.

What did you see in me?
I will never know.

But, enfolded into your warmth
listening to the love songs
in your soul.

Makes me blossom
in a way beyond words.


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  • hyper thing
    January 21
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    awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww so good


  • luna-midnight gold member
    December 16, 2008
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    aw, wow....powerful. lovely. beautiful!
    thanks for entering and good luck
    Stephanie ♥


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    November 28, 2008

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    this was something else, that is all that come to mind a lovely poem, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest


  • SummerlandRayne gold member
    November 27, 2008
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    ENCHANTING!!! This one sings a lovely tune!


    Az

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