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While I can or As long as it takes


I will wait
while I can
or as long as it takes;
and,
at the end of the road
when we will meet
I am sure
you will have
no complaints;
I might be angry
but I promise
I will not ask
what took you so long;
Just the thought
of reaching
where I belong
is enough
to heal
the scars that I am
carrying along;
I will keep
the hope alive
while I can
or as long as it takes;
and on dark scary nights
I will protect
hopes and dreams
from all
the demons of the lights;
I might not have
any words left
when they talk
of happy stories
but this I promise you
I will think
of ways
of not letting
the flame of love
fade away ;
or let the passion die;
while I can
or as long as it takes;
I don't think
I really have
a choice;
I have to
and I must
survive;
Let's see
how many
eternities
it will take;
and how many
I can stay
alive;

May be , while I can
or May be,  as long as it will take..


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but do me a favor, love, don't take long

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  • Manoj Sanyal
    November 29, 2008

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    nice poem with spiritual thoughts
    Best wishes and good luck,

  • Poetryintheblood gold member
    November 28, 2008
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    Thank you for your heartfelt entry, Josie


  • AAA Taurus The Bull gold member
    November 27, 2008

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    Good

    An excruciating and powerful piece of poetry I, wonderfully, about God’s love and truth, this is very well done. Very much enjoyed There was no error. No typos. Nothing to change. Check out one of mines, I look forward to your next write