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Rejected Roses


My Darling

Kissing you last night beneath the stars

I swear for a moment

they were shining brighter just for us

I still chuckle when remembering the old couple who

stopped us on the sidewalk as they laughed,

saying "it must be love"

We were standing there, kissing beneath the streetlight

both of us oblivious to the chill in the air

I will forever cherish the time we spent

together

It was a wonderful birthday

in those precious few hours my heart escaped

and melted into yours

together our souls danced

The love we made was so perfect

in your arms I long to stay

But we both know the consequences of being caught

Keep the rose for me, my love

It was kissed by the lips that last tasted yours

and watered by tears my heart now cries

Until our next rendevou

I love you!

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  • Angels Whispers gold member
    November 27, 2008
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    beautiful

    Hi, you have penned here a very beautiful poem, so full of love.The images that your words brought forth were wonderful and so loving. These lines below, sum up the whole poem and are truly beautiful to read....

    It was kissed by the lips that last tasted yours
    and watered by tears my heart now cries....

    I wish you all the best in the contest.
    Much love and happiness.
    ~Angel-anne~