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Between the 21st and 38th Floors

 

 

We left our bodies, but not our senses

hot tongue lashing, warm neck swooning

arms and fingers clutching, exploring…

 

We danced an Otis levitation

oooo's and ahhh’s, smiles so wide

hindered by post-modern walls

our corporeal bodies never moving

respectable, proper, in office attire

straight, erect, staring straight ahead…

 

Mmmm mmmm...

but such a journey

between the 21st and 38th floors;

I was breaking sweat before it ended…

 

So we seemed motionless,

though one tiny move, one small twitch closer

and I'd have been glued to her forever…

 

 

 

Author notes

a typical ride on the elevator... "Otis"- the Otis Elevator Co.- first and still primary manufacturer of elevators...

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  • Cannonsfire gold member
    November 27, 2008

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    I wonder at the typical remark LOL but nicely suggested anyways C


  • ConjurerCaptainTam
    November 27, 2008

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    ive broke out in a cold sweat

    great imagery...too great, you've got me thinking naughty lol