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You're never there for me

VERSE
You used to be here,
Singing your heart out,
For me.

You used to love me,
But then you left,
On that cold CHRISTMAS night.


CHORUS

I can't live without you,
It's Christmas,
But your not here.
It's Christmas,
But you decided to leave,
Why couldn't you stay,
A little longer.

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By Brisingr

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  • AngelFace97
    November 27, 2008
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    dont write about love, youre 12 years old, you dont know what real love is, i am sick n' tired of kids your age writing about LOVE and how their boyfriend or girlfriend has left them, it sucks, id expect that from maybe a 16 or 17 year old not from someone dumb like you


  • Maxboy gold member
    November 27, 2008
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    Very sad, nicely done, but so sad. Keep up the good work.