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the cure

you asked for the answer,
but i couldnt even give you a question.

i asked you for love,
but all you could give was rejection.

i gave you my heart,
but all that i got was frustration.

i asked god for strength,
and all i received was temptation.

all i keep feeling is pain,
and the pain comes again.

i asked for a cure, and all i received
was a pen.

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  • poeticcaresses
    November 27, 2008

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    Wow. Very interesting take on life's questions. A perspective I'm sure we all can relate to at some point in our lives. Very well written. I really enjoyed this. Good work!