you already know this,
but im crazy about you.
i love you when you sleep.
watching your eyes flutter,
your face so much more calm
than in waking. i wonder if
youre dreaming about me.
i love you when we fuck,
feeling you hard under the
covers, too scared to look
you in the eye because i
dont know who i'll find.
i love you when im high.
i love lying next to you.
you seem so safe and warm
and soft. i love that feeling,
even though i know its a lie.
you probably dont know this,
but im leaving.
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- "Oh, mirror in the sky, what is love? Can the child within my heart rise above? Can I sail through the changing ocean tide? Can I handle the seasons of my life?". . by JinSays.
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THIS:
i love you when im high.
i love lying next to you.
you seem so safe and warm
and soft. i love that feeling,
even though i know its a lie.
you probably dont know this,
but im leaving.
FABULOUS.
I am so entranced by this write.
Wonderful work, I LOVE IT.
best wishes,
Jin
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