next door
a smudge of shadow
in search of sun
Author notes
Prompt: Next door
10 words
In a list
A contest entry
- how creative can you be in only 10 words? by Lavender Butterfly.
550 points, ended November 27, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Excellent
Nice, indeed. The brevity of it leaves a world of shadow to explore. You expressed your self quite well. -
Saddest thing I'm asked to do
Is impose a line on a tree
Amputate what a neighbor
Claims is across a
Borderline -
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Ah!
Why am I not surprised that you read me to a T?
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Very captivating indeed! Good luck in the contest
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captivating... x
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