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Judgement Time

Missing image
Dangled like a marrionette
amongst your sins,
viewing takes place
through your noose of  lies.

Dangled feet of innocence
still,
as brittle bones of loveless hands
crack,
beneath falsehood's fingers.

Blistered lips engorge,
spewing hypocritical bile.

Unseen jury
tightens the noose
with each masquerade of betrayal

and you receive the crown
of a delusional fraud.






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Artist credit: http://smygol.deviantart.com/art/The-last-court-45593761

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  • Margaret Denham gold member
    December 2, 2008

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    Dark and abstract but you still branded it with your wonderful word choices and great flow of thoughts.

    Love Margaret

  • jcat gold member
    December 1, 2008
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    A most interesting take on the prompt!! I quite enjoyed this and I thank you for your entry...


  • sunoir
    November 28, 2008
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    Loved your take on the pic...so darkly disturbing...nice


  • PhantomsAngel87 Greeters member
    November 27, 2008

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    Hood Wink!

    o.O
    The darkness within this just slowly seeps out almost unsuspecting ... I am deeply intrigued by this and want to read it over and over!

    Best of Luck

    Stay safe
    ~Manda
    (Apologies for late Hood-Wink!)