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How Lucky I Am

How wonderful it is
to smell the dew;
rise each day
from a bed
made for two.
How wonderful it is
to watch
them play;
see them grow
in every-way.
The sweet
pitter patter
of  tiny feet,
Tapping
out a
rhythmic beat

  reminds me ...
how lucky I am.


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