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Im A Lucky Girl

I wake up every morning
on a bed I get to sleep on
i'm a lucky girl I must say
with luxuries from beyond

I'm grateful for the earth under my feet
i'm grateful for the trees
that help me breathe a new life everyday
with a calm and  gentle breeze

Thank you God for the food I consume
and for the clean water I can drink
Thank you for the people around me
and for giving me the ability to think

Thank you for the roof my parents provide me,
the bright sky and the noisy crowds
Thank you for the rain that comes once a while
and for the sun shining through the clouds

There is nothing more I could ask for
but something i'd like to give
my thanks to you oh Lord-the generous
for giving me this life to live





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I'm Grateful I'm Alive

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  • Emmyb gold member
    February 27

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    pleasant

    This is a pleasant little gem. thank you for entering. im glad you are so full of thanks and I am pleased this writes much like a prayer.

    Emma


  • Beauty Of Silence
    November 29, 2008

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    aww this is really sweet. we should always be thankful for what we have, and you've expressed it very beautifully here. wonderful job, keep penning


  • Randomly Beautiful
    November 29, 2008
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    Nicely spoken poet.

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