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thank you.

i handed you my heart
and for what in return?
broken remnants.
like a yard sale puzzle,
i'm missing pieces.
pieces that are probably lost,
carelessly hidden behind the couch.
thank you.

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  • sca
    December 10, 2008

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    Almost like a message you'd scrawl on a sticky note for them eh?

    short, effective, apparently rushed but in reality well turned over in the mind.

    => Jess


  • Rheea gold member
    November 30, 2008
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    hidden not lost? oh my


  • Heartbreaker Eyes
    November 27, 2008
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    Oh hell. Thank you. That was a freaking twist; I absolutely loved that.


  • arafura gold member
    November 27, 2008
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    Good work poet! The story of my life!


  • Hateful Apathy
    November 27, 2008
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    Interesting title. Other than that. Leaves me pretty much speechless.

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