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Next Door

Flowers,
Beauty,
Lovers,
Humanity,
These
Are
The
Things
Next Door

A contest entry

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  • Ellis gold member
    December 5, 2008

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    Next Door Horror Story

    Flowers, Lovers, Beauty, Humanity
    This leads all cats to insanity
    Eat the flowers and hide your faces
    Move out into other places

    Tiki Cat
    Buy Tiki's Cat Food
    "Too Good For Humans"


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    November 27, 2008
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    lovely things... x


  • Iridessa MoonFlower
    November 27, 2008

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    I love it! This is great, so true. Thank you for sharing. In Love & Light... Blessed Be! ~~Iridessa~~


  • StickyNote5
    November 27, 2008
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    i really like this


  • Lady Australis silver member
    November 27, 2008
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    i think you did very well for 10 words
    well done and good luck in the contest


  • Bella Cullen
    November 27, 2008
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    Cool. short and sweet.

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