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Trapped and...

Stuck
In an



                  *                              *
        *                *              *                *
*            infi              *            nity              *
        *                *              *              *
                  *                              *


Of uncertainty

Searching for direction

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                  S                                 
                                                   
                                                                          T.


Author notes

Sol- luna

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Comments

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  • xeroabyss II
    February 18
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    I like how you make infinity stare back at you in this.
    -cheers


  • sol-luna
    February 2
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    thanks kari for dropping by.


  • Kari gold member
    February 2

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    I really enjoyed the format. I could feel the emotions when I read this piece. Congrats on the gold.

    Kari


  • couldbeworse
    December 22, 2008
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    Very different but well done. I really liked the layout and wording....especially "stucked" lol.


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    December 20, 2008

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    Ah..what a thoughtful poetry you have share..a philosophy of the life is seen in few words...a gareat poem indeed..well done..


  • Noir mariposa...x gold member
    December 15, 2008

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    I love love love the layout of this!
    Something new, something unique.
    Very well done for ten words!!


    Thanks for your entry!
    I wish you the best of luck
    Claire x

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