Snake Charmer #2
Skin like bark, cracking and cracking-
Dust of your ancestors caked in your pores.
Cross legged on a magic carpet.
You're hunched over a basket weaved by
A peasent lady, who sold it for a few coins.
You sit upright like towers you've never seen-
With a slender Frame like the instrument you play,
Created by your grandfather.
Teleport to Eden and create a tune
To paralyze the dreaded snake
From offering Eve the lucious fruit.
A contest entry
- Contest for free verse poems... no PW please... topic.. any except erotica by Manoj Sanyal.
400 points, ended November 30, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What do you think?
Comments
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Magic carpet and the snake charmer to paralyze the dreaded snake from offering Eve the luscious fruit.... well penned... some spelling mistakes though....
Best wishes and good luck,

