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messages through pretty windows

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she dipped her hand in my pocket
pulling out tiny pieces
of imagination

where daylight lingered
in many stores of song
and God's angels spoke directly to our hearts
reminding little feet
to play together in dreams

always

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"Dreams" by Laura Berry

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  • Samplette gold member
    November 28, 2008

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    Just lovely! I like the imagery here very much. Thank you for entering. I really enjoyed the read.
    Sam


  • Maxboy gold member
    November 27, 2008

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    This is so adorable,
    "she dipped her hand in my pocket
    pulling out tiny pieces
    of imagination".

    That part is wonderful...Best wishes in the contest