An urge to undress to lay you bare,
to see, what's showing below without it?
Revealing territories usually hidden
for a peek of sensual ribs and moles.
Retain your modesty of any exhibition,
but if it's protected under a layer of rags,
what about when these texts and poems
I write here sheltered behind my nickname.
They reveal much more than your nakedness
without even classified as X.. may be alluring,
I feel jealousy but really discovered that
your canvas is a warm and cozy cocoon.
Why don't I come to the heart of your sleep,
ironic, I know, but asleep nonetheless,
Why don't I come before you wake up,
unleashing my thoughts in absence of
Dreams you made, but awake and eyes full of stars,
you were confident of the future, full of ecstasies,
if a reality caught you, of which I'm unfortunately aware,
to again dream just a simple sensuality can in night.
Author notes
~spiritualangel~
Prompt: Option 4
http://miss-o-photography.deviantart.com/art/Simply-Sensual-Sepia-90915834
A contest entry
- Afternoon Adult Quickie! Interested? by Sweet Impatience.
1000 points, ended November 30, 2008, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Hopefully waiting for your precious comments
Comments
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this is an absolutely amazing poem. very sensual, erotic and I really like reading it. the imagery is excellent and quite vivid. Wonderful take on the prompt .. I really enjoy reading your poetry.
good luck
kat
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Umm..Okay. All I have to say is WOW! I am sorry. Speechless! Great work. Good luck in the contest.
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