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Beautiful

you look at me
and call me Beautiful
i look at myself
and i don't see
what you see
so you have to tell me
what is so Beautiful
about something so ugly.

all my life
i grew up
thinking that
only my family
loved me but not in the way
i wanted to be loved
so it is hard to believe
when someone calls me Beautiful

i say that
"you can have
any woman that you want"
and yet you choose me
and i wonder why.
you just say
"you're Beautiful"

i don't know why
that word upsets me
but it does

you call my Beautiful
and i wonder why you do
the more you call me Beautiful
the more i start to believe you

tell me what you feel.

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  • LylaEmoriaCullen
    December 8, 2008
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    I see a big future in your writing keep up the good work


  • Draig aine gold member
    December 5, 2008
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    awesome

    you are growing by leaps and bounds keep writing kk


  • Artemis Huntress
    November 29, 2008
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    OH MY GOD THATS WHAT I FEEL EXCEPT NOBODY CALLS ME BEAUTIFUL.


  • Swan song gold member
    November 29, 2008
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    This was a poem to put one in awe elegant heartfelt and as pretty as a poppy on a Spring day


  • Lady Australis silver member
    November 27, 2008

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    that is beacuse sweets in his eyes you are , its really hard to belive i know , ive knon my man or years and i still find it ahrf to belive him sometimes
    much love

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