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The Creep

I am the creep,
who watches you sleep.
At night I'm always there.

You'd never know,
untill I grow,
in the back of your mind.

I think you'll find,
I'm of a darker kind.
-the key to all your fears

Too many nights,
you wake in fright,
to wish those dreams away.

To keep you here,
to get closer near,
I come in the costume of shadow.

To keep you hush,
to avoid a fuss,
I wear a mask of silence.

And closer each time,
with this progress of mine,
I see deep inside you life-

Your past of pain,
your preasent of streangth,
and the future that i'll join.

not to harm,
dont be alarmed.
I only wish to obsess you.

But they call it a crime,
to whatch you shine,
to observe you every day.

So my distance I'll keep,
just a lonely "freak"
but tracking your every move....



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I had just stopped reading some Edgar Allan Poe and my brain got an idea....

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