my tears chase eachother
down the side of my face
they make me go blind
stumbling around in disgrace
your words tear my body
they dig their own hole
faster and faster
to rip at my soul
your eyes scorne me
my heart to a flame
nothing is sweet
not even his name
all is lost
them, my way
what to do now?
what to say?
I need to leave
get away from this place
where I won't hurt
but this isn't the case
I'm chained here
memories of the past
and hopefully not too long
is how I will last
Author notes
Cat10
sorry that it isn't so great, working progress here!
Comments
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still nothing your write ceases to amaze me your awesome I really like this one and the other person who commented doesn't know what they're talking about this is really good. your rhyme and flow are perfect =]
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thanks =)
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I'm not really fond of rhyme, but this was alright. it didn't seem forced, but it wasn't amazing either. the first and second stanzas are my favourite though. good poem.
thanks for entering and goodluck
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