Orange streetlights flicker
Leaves rustle, breaking the silence
Chilled breeze swirls in autumn air
Heaven shatters grey clouds
Sending angelic drops spiraling down
To compose a tune as ripples form
Thunder dissolves in lonely shouts
Lightning melts in muddy puddles
Pouring rain begins to play a sweet melody
As raindrops slide down glossy leaves
And tap-dance under a never-ending rainbow
Author notes
Hey
i chose option4, Sweet Melody. yea, i chose your name 
anyhoo... hope you like it 
A contest entry
- Options, Quotes. by LoveDeprived.
700 points, ended December 1, 2008, 15 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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amazing!!!
wish I could write something as descriptive as this...
I love everything but i got to pick up a favorite part
Pouring rain begins to play a sweet melody
As raindrops slide down glossy leaves
And tap-dance under a never-ending rainbow
lavett!!!
xx
Anna Lee
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tap-dance under a never-ending rainbow
i loved it !!!
good work here...nice imagery !!
good luck to u in life !
Anagh -
"Pouring rain begins to play a sweet melody
As raindrops slide down glossy leaves
And tap-dance under a never-ending rainbow" - I love this last part here. It's so beautiful, and makes me feel at peace when I read it. The title describes your poem perfectly. Wonderful write. -
Cool write. Well done.
Tod
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this makes me wanna go play in the rain
good write keep it up
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That was excellent! You really are a talented poet.
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aww...it's lovely...
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this poem is really good keep up th good work
hugs u tightly
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