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Peace Within the Wild

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My mortal journey
Leads me to another place -
Peace within the wild.

 

 

Author notes

Inspired by Basho (1644-1694).

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  • Disturbed Prodigy
    November 28, 2008

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    wonderfully done, the kind of peace that come from a haiku still kind of amaze me, when you think about how well not really hard but not easy it is to do. keep it flowing


  • waydownuponjoy
    November 27, 2008

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    Perfecto! ...

    few words, lots of thoughts ... and a great place to sense all! jy


  • Sunshine Always
    November 27, 2008

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    This really speaks to me Cyn of where my life is at this moment in time."My mortal journey leads me to another place-Peace within the wild". Excellent ...Peace, love and hugs...mal


  • apropos
    November 27, 2008
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    lovely! very peaceful and soothing.


  • Rose Angel gold member
    November 27, 2008

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    Ooh! This speaks to my spirit...Peace within the wild...another place! Take me there! Wow...what a haiku!


  • ScreaminMime
    November 27, 2008
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    Plum flowers aren't red,
    Just ask Mr. Chen.

    Nice haiku,
    how Zen.


  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    November 26, 2008
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    A lovely place and poem.

    • Cynthia Gaines gold member
      November 27, 2008
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      Thank you for the kudos!!!

      I'm glad you were able to stop in and read my poem tonight, thank you for the thoughtful comments!! Peace, Cyn

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