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Ode To The lovely Miss Bic.



My pen/is my lover, I long to refill her over and over again.

I search for her when I'm in the mood, to express my urgings,
removing her from one set of her many drawers.

She moves with me across a bleached white rectangle
as I press the tiny button on her end.

Then she comes with me, in long slashing strokes on exquisite journeys.

We stain the sheets with shared passion, she bleeds ink,
with which I blend thought.

She lies comfortably nestled in my hand, smooth and slender,
copying my every move.
         
My pen/is my lover, laced between my fingers,sharing my most
intimate secrets with her every arch, each "O" and "G."

Lost in the "Y" of her, till my mind grows weary of her pleasure
then I offer her a nightcap,

and stagger off to my bed ........alone again.

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by: Artis .....Amaranthine Lover

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  • amaranthine lover gold member
    December 28, 2008
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    this is emotionally sad. but I love how you reached your idea, very well thought out


  • iamlost gold member
    December 15, 2008

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    I loved the double meanings throughout this!! Wonderfully done, you keep it tasteful, but also cheeky and potent.

    "We stain the sheets with shared passion, she bleeds ink,
    with which I blend thought."

    Amazing as always, I love your work!
    Well penned,
    ~lost


  • toomysterious
    November 27, 2008

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    Wonderfully creative. Being a pen collector as well as a poet I enjoyed this on many levels, and it sent my mind on many journeys. Not just for the ability of a pen to bring words to life on paper, but the feel of a pen, the different weights, textures, glides, flow of inks, color, on and on, much like a lover, true. Wish I'd seen this contest before the end, myself. Well done good poet.


  • heartnsoul
    November 27, 2008

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    Wonderfully delightful, fun and creative. This gleefully dances inside ones imagination. There is a free spiritedness that I rather enjoyed. One can feel the ball lightly teasing the ink, rolling in sensuality. Truly making the reader feel like....
    I’d rather be the paper you speak to in the night
    or the pen within your hand holding me just right