Look that way
Look this way
You don’t see me
No one sees me
Close your eyes
Dream away
Hold me close
And hold me tight
Please don’t let me go
Don’t let me fall
Let me fly
Let me free
Open this cage
Open your heart
Please...
Please...
The dark
The pain
Too much to take
Too much to bear
Chained down
Closed in
Not understood
I’m lost
Find me
Save me
Do you hear me...?
Can you answer me?
Cold
Wet
My fears
My dreams
They're loose
They're lost
Deeper
Darker
Nothing...
Nothing...
Is that what I am?
Is that what this is?
Feeling
Falling
looking
Serching
Nothing found
Nothing to look for
Nothing inside
Nothing outside
Just Nothing
A contest entry
- Poetry Hodgepodge by DolceVito.
875 points, ended November 30, 2008, 25 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Good
I really enjoyed how the two line stanzas are like thoughts. They are together and intertwined yet jumping from one thought to the next. Good job! -
Thank you for entering this super cool write.
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