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A Little Tickle

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Come to me

so I can use my moist feather

to slither over your pores,

use my serpentine torture

over your lips, ears and neck,

lick and set aflame each pleasure knob and button

make them erupt the volcano in your eyes.

 

I’ll caress in silky soft strokes

across your supple mounds,

wait for that powerful sonata of sighing ache,

before I follow the sultry trail by a path of voltage kisses

down to the lush and steamy valley between your thighs.

 

Where I will dance a tongue tango

over your luscious dance meadows of moans,

letting its notes bring an arching of approval.

 

Slowly will I take my wand to arouse the depths

of your warm and wet well,

driving my swelling passion into its juices,

until your hips quake for more.

 

It’s just a little tickle

that will keep on teasing

as a match to light your kindling,

my plume of throb so anxious to make them spark.

 

What you cry out for in naked intensity

shall be at your command,

my organ will play your climax serenade

with its thrusting sounds.

 

When you have finally laughed in such powerful screams,

I’ll take you by a panting afterglow surrender

unto a journey beyond that tremor ecstasy

far into the valley where the night

will keep you by a campfire

as my log burns in your needy pit,

the blaze we share in scorching pleasures

where you will be an inferno inside

from the hours

of orgasmic third degree groans.

Author notes

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  • XXStOlEn-HaLoXx
    November 30, 2008

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    holy shit....lol sry for the language but DAMN! lol idk if i wanna even enter in this contest w u in it lol...fantastic job!!


  • Desire gold member
    November 27, 2008

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    Oh My Word~

    Wowzers another piece to raise the temperature in the room
    Love the words: naked intensity
    also
    climax serenade
    She will need a fire extinguisher afterwards
    Wonderful weaving of words also images~
    Satiate the senses~ Woot!
    Beauty!!
    Thank You for sharing Your Heat and Spirit~
    Blessings to You & Yours Sweet Soul
    Best wishes in the contest too
    with much love & light~ Desire~*~


  • SummerlandRayne gold member
    November 27, 2008

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    Ahhh...now you have created a symphony in pleasure here. The imagery is excellent. The sensual connotations send intimate notions throughout. I must applaud this...you took this prompt and made it your own...BRAVO!


    Az


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    November 27, 2008

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    'tongue tango' 'as my log burns in your needy pit,'
    Wowsers! This is one HOT lilttle piece. The title caught my eye. Lol wasn't expecting my eyes to pop out though!
    Imagery? VERY VIVID!
    An excellent pioece bro. I wish you all the best with this
    Gaylene


  • hotchocolate gold member
    November 26, 2008

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    WOW!!! You have aroused all my senses with this one here LOL!!!! Shame on you LOL! Great write here and good luck in the contest

    I’ll caress in silky soft strokes
    across your supple mounds,
    wait for that powerful sonata of sighing ache,
    before I follow the sultry trail by a path of voltage kisses
    down to the lush and steamy valley between your thighs.


  • Mila7
    November 26, 2008
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    Wow excellent poem. Speechless.

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