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my alice, pt. 2

 

Like roses laying on garden's ground,

she's the sweetest flower I've ever found.

Nothing could heal my wounds and pains

like her touch or when she's holding me.

 

This love is unquenchable, our hearts forever are one.

She's the reason for my breathing, what keeps me moving on.

I could dream 1,000 dreams and none of them come true,

but I'm leaving in a reality where all of them point to you.

 

I hope you are jealous of what we have,

because it's not everyday real love grabs your hand.

For when it does and you'll know it too, don't let go

of it's hands and let it share life with you.

Half of what society claims to know will soon

break their hearts in two.

 

Alice, my darling, I'm so thankful that

what we have is real.

We don't have to wear masks or play fake,

our love is the genuine article.

 

Darling, sweet love, you are everything to me.

The reason why my sun is shining and why my heart still beats.

Even when storms come, I do not fret.

Your love has transformed me and I am new.

 

Alice, your Jasper can't live without you

and I don't ever want to.

Thinking about you brings joy like I've never felt

and renews my soul, healing my heart - making me feel

 

like I could conquer the world.

 

True love is fierce and strong

and I am dedicated to only you.

Babe, look me in the eyes when I say this,

 

"I uncontrollably, unconditionally love you".

 

Author notes

True love does this to you and I wouldn't have it any other way. I love it!
And I love you even more Baby Blue

Option 6 . Love, I love good love poems, so write me a poem about the love of your life.

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  • Need For Redemption
    December 24, 2008
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    I thouht this poem was realy sweet. The love in your words realy gushes of the page


  • Catie Sheeran gold member
    December 19, 2008

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    this is beautiful...lovely write




  • HeavensNewestAngel
    December 3, 2008

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    This is a great poem you wrote filled with much love and I am sure Alice will love it so much. Thank you for sharing and best of luck in my contest!


  • Vars
    December 2, 2008

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    Very nice poem. It was well written, and flowed like honey. I wish you well in the contest. You did a very nice job. It was also very descriptive.


  • DolceVito gold member
    November 27, 2008

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    Thank you for your beautiful, well-written entry. "True love," glad to hear some folks have found it...Good job

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