can you dream of this
a pretty boy giving you a kiss
can you dream of this
having your crush know you exist
can you dream?
can you dream of that
getting a new kind of cat
can you dream of that
getting rid of that extra fat
can you dream?
can you dream of these
the weather not being below degrees
can you dream of these
walking outside and not even freeze
can you dream?
can you dream of those
going shopping and getting all the cloths
can you dream of those
getting everything you chose
can you dream of those.....
A contest entry
- Dreams by Samplette.
700 points, ended December 2, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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What a wonderful poem!
Great write!
I like the line where you wrote:
"can you dream of these
the weather not being below degrees
can you dream of these
walking outside and not even freeze"
Fantastic use of words!!
Good job!
Don't Stop Writning!
Keep Up the Excellent work!
Sincerely,
~Trill~
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Ahhh, to child like dream, yes, I hope I can dream...can you dream of your dreams coming true, may all of them transpire-your loving mom and good luck in the contest-dream on
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thank u
thanks alot mother dear
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A nice little write. Thank you for entering.
Sam
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thanx for this comment
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