Thank you for the chance
To write a poem for you.
I love the personal poems the best.
It's something that I do.
Poetry is a way
To express just how you feel.
You want that poem to touch the heart.
I want to keep it real.
To say you are a beauty
Is really not my place
But I can tell, and all as well,
It's a joy to see your face.
And as for the poems you ink
They are a wondrous work.
We are in awe when you draw
From your mind, there where they lurk.
Now I'm finished fawning
To you, who's outta' sight.
You can respond without a thought,
I told you, iwuzrite.
Author notes
I enjoy writing my poem to someone on purpose. To put their name in the poem or a personal information so they can say, "this poem is mine" is a great feeling. Thanks for the opportunity.
A contest entry
- Write a Poem to Me by Girl-Interrupted.
500 points, ended December 8, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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Very nice
OK I do like it but it gets a little jumbled up on the fourth paragraph. I see I will have to read some of this girls work cause you said it is so good. You are a sweet sweet person and all will see.
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Heh, that ending was very well thoughtout I must say, enjoyed that very much ...
I must say, sir, to tell a beautiful girl that she is indeed beautiful would just compliment her, so I think you should be able to do that, matters not what places are and what not. Good luck in this contest.
G. -
how wonderful! you placed my name in the poem! I love that. you are definitely right, it places a personal touch in the piece!
becca
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This is really good. This is amazing. I hope you do well in the contest because if it was me, I would pick this one. Very good
~*Lady Serenity
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