pouting points beckon
her quest moves undercover
nestled in netting
Author notes
The quest is the easy part, performance demands giving more than taking and respecting "we". Ah, rapture dwells in the gray zone, always veiled in wonder, searching beyond the pursuit of ecstasy.
A contest entry
- Should I Stay...Or Should I Go?????? by SummerlandRayne.
739 points, ended December 10, 2008, 11 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Sagacious
Once again you have given us a wonderfully fresh look at a picture prompt. You never disappoint the reader by settling for the superficial. In both the poem itself and your an's your message describes the essence for meaningful, pleasurable interactions. I admire the depth you have explored in this compact verse. Bravo!
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Thank you
Thanks for your kind comments. Hope you are having a nice Holiday!
bj
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haha i want one lol =)
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Yo
I betcha do!
Thanks, but I imagine you really don't either!
Thanks for stopping by, hope you are doing well and continue to take a look now and again!
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lol yeah i doubt i would actually wear it...but i wish i would lol that would be cool
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Few words say so much...the "gray zone"...that wonderful space inbetween. One word comes to mind...{Linger}
Thanks for the entry...the background and the pic work beautifully with the verse and the sentiment.
Az
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Adroit
Like the concept of the cerebral side of sex as you suggest in both the poem and your an's. Certainly heightens and amplifies the physical dimension. Like the titillation your verse offers on both levels. I think she would stay.
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