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children from a thiad presective

there faces light up
there hands clap
there feet move with a delightful beat
watching ,wondering  as the snow drops
the tree stands high as the little star flies

the toys are so far away but we touch them just other day
food lay-ed on the table , taste buds dry and there mouth Begin to cry
the adults walk in to sit by the fire  to share there happiness and  family desires

as the screen switches of and the darkness  creeps in these Little kids
lay down to rest  in there third world mess





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this is about children watchin from the tv in the streets of africa watching the kids on tv

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  • Samplette gold member
    November 28, 2008
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    A sad ending. Nicely witten. Thank you for entering.
    Sam


  • TOEchikira
    November 26, 2008
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    aww!!! this is so sweet. i send my love to all of those kids