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Second To None

Those mountains there
have been in view
I need not see them
here fresh anew.

My avidity, my lane
calls for the 'unbeknown'
found inside the open plain
where wild seeds are sown.



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artist credit: "don't offer me roses" by temporary-peace at DA)

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  • Let-Me-Go
    November 27, 2008
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    pretty

    that was pretty i liked it! keep up the good work


  • Catie Sheeran gold member
    November 26, 2008

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    I really like the last line of this piece... Good luck in the contest dear