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Ice Flower

Frost hangs delicately
off silk petals
weighing you down
slowly you begin to wilt
a beautiful demise
the chill of winter
forces your bloom to yield
and shrink into the earth
from which you were born
but fear not
for spring will soon arrive
and you will be re-born
and full in bloom
once again



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  • Rhythm Child
    November 27, 2008
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    BEAUTIFUL
    great entry
    thanks for taking part, wishing you luck would be an insult to your talent so take care

    message me for anything
    Billy (Rhythm Child)