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  Sledding,
      Threading,
  Crashing,
      Bashing.
Here I am sledding, threading through trees.
That is me crashing, bashing my knees.

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Ok, so it was dark and that is why I hit the tree. This is a Tyburn style poem.

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  • light to a dreamer gold member
    December 2, 2008

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    LOL

    LOL, This is great I needed a laugh. This is just one of those poems you read and you just like it from the beginning.

  • PianoMan
    November 26, 2008

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    This is a really good poem too. I can totally relate to this poem. Sledding in the dark is really fun but it does have its consequences. You seem to like finding uncommon forms of poetry and then blowing everyone away by writing a totally amazing poem. Awesome job!


  • LadySerenity
    November 26, 2008
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    This is different but cute. I like it.
    Try not to hit anymore trees