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Animal Abuse

Animal abuse, its horribly wrong,
I hate it, It's horrible!
Hurting animals, what's the point?
It's so morbid and cruel!
I care so much about animals,
I own three cats, Misty, Angel, and Dinah,
I can't find the right words for it,
Hate dosen't even come close,
I want to put these animals out of their misery,
I like to watch Animal Rescue and Animal Police,
They care as much as I do,
Those that care, and those that help,
Those are the people that I like.
Take care of your pets,
No matter what their claws did to your couch,
They are as inoccent as a new born baby,
Take my words seriously, for I am very serious.
Take care, Take care, Take care.

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  • vintage
    February 27
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    x)
    i like this .


  • kareneisenlord gold member
    December 3, 2008

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    Very Nice!

    and so very true. Thank you for writing this for pets/animals who cannot speak for themselves. I feel exactly the same way you do. Welcome to our Group for Animal Lovers! Karen


  • Candy6
    November 30, 2008
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    animal abuse is wrong

    Really good stuff. Animal abuse is wrong! I LOVE ANIMALS!


  • Mystery
    November 30, 2008

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    OH MY GOSH....that was totally amazing..bravo bravo..i love this and what u stand for..u had a typo the "I" in this sentence needs to be "It""I makes me mad at the people that hurt these pets"

  • carole21
    November 29, 2008

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    well done . . more should think about this . . liked "It puts innocent animals where they just do not belong" and "Who would think to do such a thing" . .


  • Angels Whispers gold member
    November 29, 2008

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    wonderful

    Sweet heart you have penned such a wonderful poem.
    It's a sad thing that people are so cruel to animals.
    It sadness my heart greatly.
    I wish you all the best with your writing, as I can see much talent in you.
    lots of love to you,
    ~Anne~


  • storiesuntold gold member
    November 28, 2008

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    Excellent write here

    Yes we must all care for the animals abour us each day for they only know love to give back Bravo on this write


  • Darkwell
    November 27, 2008

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    Very good!

    anybody who can hurt animals should be punished i loved your poem and so did my cats they were riveted when i read it to them keep up the great work!

    Liz


  • debilynn gold member
    November 27, 2008

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    an excellent write! you are very talented as you show amazing insight that comes through in your words. keep writing poet! God bless you always

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