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Hunter encounters Fred

The hunter,
whose name was Hamo,
was getting ready to go hunting for Thanksgiving.
To find a delicious turkey.

As he got his rifle,
and loaded it to the max,
he walked in the canadian woods
with his buddy, Ulmar, searching for a flock
of turkeys.

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Fred,the caribu, was walking through the woods,
looking for lichen to eat.
walking randomly,
til he sees the two hunters.

Fred sense that they are going to hunt,
he runs full charge at them.


Ulmar starts screaming words in french
"Courir! COURIR!"(means Run or something like that)
"What?" Hamo appearently doesn't know what he said,
and before he new it Fred rammed him in the butt!!

Fred starts making whatever noise caribu do and
laughs "HAHAHAHAHAHA!"
Hamo gets angry and bends down to get his gun,
......but.....

RIIIIIIIPPPPPP!

You could see Hamo's pink underwear!

"GRRRRRR!!!!!!!!"
Hamo shoots randomly ,stomping towards the clearing the caribu ran to!

The end....

Author notes

This is the hunters and Freds point of veiw from what you didnt see in the first poem!

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  • SmartBrick
    November 29, 2008
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    First poem?I'll have to read that one...