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My Present the Bear

Talking dolls a book and a pen
clockwork soldiers moving again

I wish, I wish just for one of them
Please please Santa please tell me when

Christmas day seems a long time way
could I just have it just for the day

My hands are all cold from the snow falling down
As I dream of my present in the shop in the town

As I awake to see and find its still there
In his stripe jumper sitting smiling sits the bear



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  • Samplette gold member
    November 28, 2008
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    Very nice read. Thank you for entering the contest.
    Sam


  • Pete Greenslade gold member
    November 27, 2008
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    lovely seasonal poem bro.got me in the mood for christmas good luck