I am so scared I just dont know what to do,
I am so verry lost when not with you.
One moment your here the next you gone,
I temble at such a thought.
Author notes
short.sweet.and to the point. prompt= 5. trembling
A contest entry
- Something a Little Bit Different by SomeGirlYouKnew.
1200 points, ended December 14, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
is it good?
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this is a really sweet little write you have captured here. it's short and sweet and to the point for sure, there are a few typos in it however, but i love the feelings you have captured here, i have felt this way too, and i think a lot of people ha have
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Don't has an apostrophe as in do not. You're also has one as in you are. If you have taken out a letter you replace it with an apostrophe.
Do not. Don't.
You are. You're.
It sounds unfinished. Suggested last line "How do I carry on". Or something like that.
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ok thank you
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this is interesting. you should probably revise your spelling and grammatical errors before the contest closes.
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i am not good with gramer and my spell cheack dosent work
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