Dreaming,
window shopping
little girlfiends giggle.
Tea sets, china dolls, and tops,
Excitedly talking, leaving smudges
footprints slowly covered over.
Picking out their delights,
Snowflakes falling
Dreaming…
Author notes
"Dreams" by Laura Berry
Rictameter
The RICTAMETER is a nine-line syllabic structure. The lines start at two syllables incrementing upward by two. The 5th line will have 10 syllables and proceeds to the 9th line reversing the syllable count to the last line, which has 2 syllables. The first and ninth lines are the same word(s).
In a list
A contest entry
- Dreams by Samplette.
700 points, ended December 2, 2008, 17 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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charming !!!
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A nicely written Rictameter. You bring the picture to life with your words. Very nice. Thank you for entering.
Sam
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