Untarnished beauty of the night.
Your purple stained lips; Blossom
whether night or day hot or cold
dry or wet, my eyes lock tight.
To the Deep seas'. Fountain blue
of speckled caves of a clear sky,
your face Worn; i see not a blemish
i see.
Cleopatra, of Queens,
a budding flower, A new
Born child. a lions cub.
For all these i see beautiful
but cannot touch.
I stroke your face,
for i am Adam and you are Eve
The world is our garden
yet. here. i see no snakes
our bodys tremble.
The morning is Young.
Tomorrow is close,
a timescape of non existence,
wrapped around us, our own space.
Forever now i lay, or death take me
with battle, they close.
so when my eyes lock on yours.
my heart beats a tempo of justice
and i am forever lost.
Author notes
ignore spelling and punctuation im tired 
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a timescape of non existence,
wrapped around us, our own space
those are my favourite two lines of poetry in the world, no lie.
i love you
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very good.
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stunning. this is wonderful, and such a pleasure to read. the descriptions, the imagery here were so poewrful and intense. i realy liked this one. keep penning
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beauty is in the eye of the holder. you seem to understand that in this piece. good job
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this is beautiful. there is no other word for this...it's just beautiful. i loved it from start to finish, your words were perfect. there is a lot of great imagery and it was just all amazing.
you are really good
-checkmate.
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WOW! hOW VIVID AND INTENSE WITH PASSION. yOUR IMAGERY AND FLOW FILLED WITH WONDERFUL SENTIMENT AND METAPHORES. tHIS WAS ALMOST LIKE A JOURNEY
Great write!
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lol this write is fantastic!
Great work!!!
I can't wait to read your other stuff...
=)
Gwen
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Hard to Do
For an old former English teacher, ignoring is hard to do. However, if I do your poem expresses a variety f emotions well. Its flow and pace are excellent.
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Very beautiful and good flow.
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